心中香溢四时

江晶晶江涛

曾剑之 发表于 2019-12-24 17:42
讯，名词，并非动词，对不上“开”字，比不上“到”字合对。

对句:雪中春动多时。


探讨有益，谢曾老师！敬茶！！

曾剑之

江晶晶江涛 发表于 2019-12-24 23:12
对句:雪中春动多时。

不如：雪中春艳多时。
传统对法动词 可对形容词。

江晶晶江涛

好句！探讨有益，敬茶！！

罗志海

秋风鬓霜

细雨温柔春草碧
秋风飒爽桂枝香
心怀舒畅悠诗韵
笔力渐成现鬓霜


The Autumn Wind And My Frosty Temple

The drizzle is tender
the spring grass is emerald
The autumn wind is valiant
the laurel branched are fragrant

My bosom is comfortable
the leisure rhymes
Vigour of strokes in calligraphy is gradually strong
appeared my frosty temples

7/25/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第6548首对联体诗
The 6,548th Two Pairs of Couplets