观望

罗志海

观望


双鹤梅前舞
一琴月下弹
乘龙破浪观沧海
跃马扬鞭望泰山

格律体新诗 ● 罗志海著译
第12首五七绝对联体诗 2021年2月6日


Watched And Look At

Double cranes were dancing in front of the plums
One lute was played below the moonlight
I rode a dragon, broke the waves and watched the sea
I jumped on a horse, flourished a whip and look at Mount Tai

Metric New Poetry by Luo Zhihai, 2/6/2021
The 12th Five-Seven Words of Quatrain of Two Pairs of Couplets

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五七绝对联体诗
罗志海 / 文

刚刚14:22，午睡醒来，想到，绝句是四句，每一句的字数是相等的。为什么不可以是长短句呢？长短句也就变成词了。
我想写长短句，就叫五七绝对联体诗吧。

2021年2月3日14:22-14：40


Five-Seven Words Of Quatrains Of Two Pares Of Couplets
by Luo Zhihai

Just at 14:22, I woke up from a nap and thought that quatrains are four sentences, and the number of words in each sentence is equal. Why not long and short sentences? Long and short sentences become lyrics.
If I want to write long and short sentences, it's called the Five-Seven Words of Quatrain of Two Pairs of Couplets.

Beijing Time 20:50-21:00,2/3/2021 Transalted

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