对联体诗（开阔诗野）

罗志海

程旭 发表于 2019-5-22 07:02
筆瘦常達水千瀾山萬座
歌洪正謳情一段愛三分

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江驶孤帆君送客
檐归双燕喙叼春
人生似梦荷盘露
世事如尘山涧云


Saw Off

A sail on the river was solitary
you saw your guests off
Double swallows returned on the eave
their mouths bit spring

Life like a dream
dew on the lotus leaves
World affairs like dust
clouds above the mountain gully

5/22/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8499首对联体诗
The 8,499th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-source-of-poetry/#content

程旭

罗志海 发表于 2019-5-23 19:02
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江驶孤帆君送客

触景生情，

程旭

罗志海 发表于 2019-5-23 19:02
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江驶孤帆君送客

感情深沉，

程旭

罗志海 发表于 2019-5-23 19:02
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江驶孤帆君送客

而又含蓄凝练，

程旭

罗志海 发表于 2019-5-23 19:02
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江驶孤帆君送客

言简意赅，

程旭

罗志海 发表于 2019-5-23 19:02
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江驶孤帆君送客

充分体现了诗人“沉郁顿挫”的艺术风格。

罗志海

程旭 发表于 2019-5-25 06:42
充分体现了诗人“沉郁顿挫”的艺术风格。

秋思

万里还乡情怯怯
三江涌浪意茫茫
寒园酌酒怜花落
秋夜凭栏叹月凉


The Autumn Thought

Three Rivers surged waves
my mind was vast
Returned home from ten thousand miles
my feeling was shy

In the cold garden drinking
we pitied flowers falling
I leaned against the railing and sighed moon cold
in the autumn night

5/31/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8541首对联体诗
The 8,541th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... -moonlight/#content

程旭

罗志海 发表于 2019-6-1 11:46
秋思

万里还乡情怯怯

思乡之情跃然纸上！

罗志海

感概

一句狂言含假意
三分醉意吐真言
地瓜水果同销售
孔雀锦鸡群舞翩


Thoughts And Feelings

A wild remark implies falsehood
One-third drunkenness speaks the truth
Peacocks and golden pheasants group to dance
Same to sale sweet potatoes and fruits

7/6/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8672首对联体诗
The 8,672th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/spring-466/

程旭

一句狂言含假意
三分醉意吐真言
      这两句不错！